Commentary on ‘Foo Fighters Music Review’ and ‘The Birth of a Band, Waring Green’

My aim in create verbally these pieces were both to inform and fructify across my opinions to an sense of hearing of interested indorsers. For the harmony follow-up my hypothecate audience was young music lovers and for the biography it was to a greater ex tent for anyone who is interested in development some people who give up had an interesting life experience, perhaps a similar one to themselves. I fateed my pieces to be pardon and amusing, and in the music review, more slack so that it would appeal to people. The biography was intended to be informative, whereas the review was intended to be more open in view as to include the audience more.In order to get this I have deliberately used a bit of techniques. In the title of my second production piece I have include about alliteration of the sound which catches the attention of the indorser and helps to establish the master(prenominal) story.In The Birth of a Band I used principally start-off person pronouns s uch as my and I. This helps to show the reader that it is from my own personal view and it is an actual real life even that I have encountered.In the Foo Fighter review I used chiefly 3rd person pronouns such as their, and I withal named people and link the event directly to their name. this is the opposite of the other piece as it establishes that the music and the credit belongs to them and no-one else.I have tried to be quite informal in both of my pieces by using words such as dodgy and constructions such as Pointless? Funny This helps to make the reader tonus more at ease when reading it, and there is also some intended humour in order to make the reader laugh, more so in the review than the biography piece.In the review of the Foo Fighters I included one instance of a mild taboo lexeme. doodly-squat good Again this is a point in the text that gives the reader a bit of comic relief and a chance to contemplate on my opinions with their own. This is wherefore I decided to add quite a lot of interrogatives into the text, even though I heapnot expect an answer, the reader can establish their own views and opinions about what I think and also about what they think in comparison.I aimed to make my two pieces as clear as I possibly could. I used a number of techniques to ensure this. Firstly I used short strings of words, for example, That was a real boost, and tried to avoid overly long sentences. I didnt want my readers to become bored of reading too many facts or opinions at a time. Secondly I used fairly short unprejudiced lexemes. I tried to keep my words either monosyllabic or disyllabic because this makes the text flow more smoothly and doesnt make the reader get confused at long complicated words.In my two pieces I have used a lot of ultimo tense, mainly in The Birth of a Band to show how what we have achieved is a past event. For example was and asked. However I did use some present progressive, impart keep trying in order to show how our b and and music atomic number 18 still going. I also used some present tense, mainly in the Foo Fighters Music review, to show how their music is still in development. It also helps to convey how it is their most recent album, as I am public lecture about it in the here and now.I included in my review of the Foo Fighters music an overall grade of how I feel about their music. This is nightclub out of ten. Most people will understand this as a good mark because it is on a scale of one to ten which is the most common way of grading something. I feel it is a good way of rounding up my review, although I do think it could lead to the reader skipping the rest of the text and just taking the degree at face value rather than investigating further into why I have given this grade. But if the reader is interested sufficiency I do not see this as a study problem.I believe I have successfully achieved my targets in writing these pieces. I feel as though they are very entertain and they conv ey my feelings and opinions towards the subject matter very effectively. I feel that the breeding I have provided is sound and believable.